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February 10, 2007

A poem i wrote and then put on an image i designed and fixed on photoshop… enjoy.

Random Lives

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12 comments

  1. Nice poem, moving and all but from a Literative perspective, I’d like to point out that it didn’t give me the goosebumps while reading it. It lacked a bit of life I am not sure how to describe it. It also didn’t follow a structure at all hehe so in Nuttie’s terms it would be a moem instead of a poem.

         by Jackie February 10, 2007 at 9:22 pm
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  2. it’s not meant to give goosebumps, it’s just a train of thought, and i know it’s a moem, i just didn’t want to write moem and ppl would tell me i have a badliya :p

         by Swair February 10, 2007 at 9:30 pm
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  3. i liked the idea of the poem, but it lacked feelings :S

         by Fantasia February 11, 2007 at 11:00 am
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  4. Hey swair:D
    Lovely poem/moem.
    Thought it was real nice, hon.
    Hope you’re ok;)
    ~ihbe

         by iheartblackeyes February 11, 2007 at 11:23 am
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  5. Fantasia: it lacked feelings cos it’s a general look on the outside, i don’t have any feelings towards ppl and their random lives lol

    ihbe: hey babe! thanks :D
    and everything’s fine, thank u for asking :*

         by Swair February 11, 2007 at 11:48 am
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  6. I often wonder that as well. I liked the ideas and the photo

         by jewaira February 11, 2007 at 5:33 pm
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  7. Jewaira: thank u :D to tell u the truth, i made the image initially to put the poem YOU wrote on it, the one about being watched all the time, no privacy… then i sorta got lazy and it was too late… but i’m glad u could related to the idea of the poem :*

         by Swair February 11, 2007 at 8:25 pm
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  8. You know…sometimes, I wonder about the people passing by me…who they are, what they do, what they’re thinking.

    Especially when driving. When waiting for a traffic light to turn green, everybody’s looking forward, with a stern look on their face. I just wonder what’s going on through their minds….strange?

         by Sou February 11, 2007 at 8:34 pm
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  9. no, normal..

    i thought of writing this when i saw a bunch of indians at a bus stop, there was one guy in a clean pressed suit, others in jeans and some in dirty work clothes.. i started thinking “that guy over there in the suit… what’s he thinking? is he off to a job interview that would change his life forever? what about the others there… are they just waiting to go on with their lives? do they envy the suit man?” and the thoughts go on and on and on..

         by Swair February 11, 2007 at 8:43 pm
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  10. I KNOW!!!

    Wow, there are two possibilities, e7na fadyeen awy, or we just care too much. :D

         by Sou February 11, 2007 at 8:45 pm
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  11. I’m eating pasta without salt :-(

         by adorra February 11, 2007 at 9:49 pm
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  12. Adorra: i have no idea how that would taste LOL i can buy u some salt if want and ship it to the US as a Valentine’s gift.. with a card that says “May You Never Eat Anything Without Salt Ever Again”…. nice,eh? ;)

         by Swair February 11, 2007 at 10:14 pm
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